Sunday, February 06, 2005

Spoil 1.02

Automatic Aesthetic or Hermeneutic Challenge with the

100 Trillion Haiku Generator.

This is what it offered upon a first visit:

female scrambles, hard
inmate chastises, nervous small
eagle retreating
It screams dangling participle all over.
Let us improve on these cold, clinical, sterile poetic machinations:

fecund brambles, squi-
shy, great castles, rodent's
pain easing
"A problem for the accomplishment of an Haiku is the narrative impulse. Yet, no story must be related within it. Disconnected images must serve the synaesthetic drive of the Haiku form."
J.E. Hofferty, The Art and Shape of the Haiku (Griffenull, Boston, 1987), p.256


At 7:37 pm, Anonymous Anonymous said...

trogglodytes encamped

At 8:48 pm, Blogger Geist said...

Cavedwellers dwell ?


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